Oh who am I kidding? Critiques begged for! Please, if you have a chance, hop over to
Falling For Fiction and take a look at the first page of my zombie novella, Flesh Eating Zombies and Evil Ex-Girlfriends.
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A zombie picture, just for fun. :) This is from our high school spring play last year. |
Any critique would be highly appreciated! Thanks!
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ReplyDeleteI love that title!
ReplyDeleteGoing to check it out. Awesome pic.
ReplyDeleteGreat snap shot! And awesome title by the way.
ReplyDeleteI really like your opening. ;0)
ReplyDeleteOoh, I will check that out soon when I have a longer moment!
ReplyDeleteAllison (Geek Banter)
I just checked out your opening and think it's such a fun start to a zombie novella! Discovering the babysitter was eaten really drew me in, and the inappropriate humor that followed made it even better. :)
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