Thursday, November 15, 2012

Critiques Welcome

Oh who am I kidding? Critiques begged for! Please, if you have a chance, hop over to Falling For Fiction and take a look at the first page of my zombie novella, Flesh Eating Zombies and Evil Ex-Girlfriends.

A zombie picture, just for fun. :) This is from our high school spring play last year.


Any critique would be highly appreciated! Thanks!

8 comments:

  1. Great snap shot! And awesome title by the way.

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  2. Ooh, I will check that out soon when I have a longer moment!

    Allison (Geek Banter)

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  3. I just checked out your opening and think it's such a fun start to a zombie novella! Discovering the babysitter was eaten really drew me in, and the inappropriate humor that followed made it even better. :)

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  4. Greetings, earthling!! Shouldn’t be long, gottawanna run back to Heaven; however, in the meantime, take anything and everything you wanna from our wonderfull, plethora-of-thot to write the next, great masterpeace -if- I can but kiss your gorgeous, adorable feets and/or cuddle withe greatest, ex-mortal-girly-ever to arrive in Seventh Heaven (God made only you, k? the BEST-in-the-WEST? God threw-away-the-rest, miss gorgeous). Think about it. Do it! Get back with me Upstairs, k? God bless you …thewarningsecondcoming.com

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