tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post2368067342966834747..comments2024-03-27T00:28:59.452-07:00Comments on Writing on the Wall: Critiques WelcomeRachel Schieffelbeinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01629400142880123520noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-33197753029556143972012-11-20T15:39:15.428-08:002012-11-20T15:39:15.428-08:00Greetings, earthling!! Shouldn’t be long, gottawan...Greetings, earthling!! Shouldn’t be long, gottawanna run back to Heaven; however, in the meantime, take anything and everything you wanna from our wonderfull, plethora-of-thot to write the next, great masterpeace -if- I can but kiss your gorgeous, adorable feets and/or cuddle withe greatest, ex-mortal-girly-ever to arrive in Seventh Heaven (God made only you, k? the BEST-in-the-WEST? God threw-away-the-rest, miss gorgeous). Think about it. Do it! Get back with me Upstairs, k? God bless you …thewarningsecondcoming.com-blessed holy socks, the non-perishable-zealothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00241446130197185049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-87662095518504270872012-11-18T22:26:33.905-08:002012-11-18T22:26:33.905-08:00I just checked out your opening and think it's...I just checked out your opening and think it's such a fun start to a zombie novella! Discovering the babysitter was eaten really drew me in, and the inappropriate humor that followed made it even better. :)Heather R. Holdenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04309060285955963459noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-56916675148753162892012-11-16T12:28:01.202-08:002012-11-16T12:28:01.202-08:00Ooh, I will check that out soon when I have a long...Ooh, I will check that out soon when I have a longer moment!<br /><br />Allison (<a href="http://www.alsgeekbanter.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Geek Banter</a>)Allisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02586970076965983267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-41741530924018946312012-11-16T11:40:12.576-08:002012-11-16T11:40:12.576-08:00I really like your opening. ;0) I really like your opening. ;0) Jenny S. Morrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00482342313938669366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-22419197047889512412012-11-16T05:23:22.445-08:002012-11-16T05:23:22.445-08:00Great snap shot! And awesome title by the way.Great snap shot! And awesome title by the way.jaybirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10708353376256621965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-27948197005159714572012-11-15T23:42:31.668-08:002012-11-15T23:42:31.668-08:00Going to check it out. Awesome pic.Going to check it out. Awesome pic.Sheena-kay Grahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17712661419116636671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-57072403459534917432012-11-15T19:29:06.920-08:002012-11-15T19:29:06.920-08:00I love that title!I love that title!Suzihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16502606950280751205noreply@blogger.com