A big, BIG thank you to the girls at Falling for Fiction! You rock! This bloghop has been so much fun, and very helpful. It's great to focus in on these sorts of things. So thank you so much!
I'm sharing lines from my MG novel, GRETEL. You can check out some of my 'hookers' here.
I panicked that day, and Hansel would pay for it every day after.
“Well," the old woman said, gripping Hansel's arm, "since you ate something of mine, perhaps I’ll eat something of yours.”
"Yes," I lied.
She spoke quietly, spinning her tale into my ear.
“Either way, I’ll be happy.” She smiled, showing her yellow, twisted teeth.
The witch was waiting for us.
I knew what I had to do.
The witch stopped laughing.