They are dividing up the judging as follows:
· Best Plot Twist - Cassie
· Best Love Story - Morgan
· Best Tragedy - Leigh
I've decided to join Team Plot Twists with my new spin on Cinderella.The shoe was the second thing Ella noticed when she stepped into her house that night. The first was the blood pooling under her father's back. The stiletto, just a few feet away, was the same shade of red.
Her eyes had been drawn to it as she ran to her father's side. She knew right away who it belonged to, even though she'd never seen it before. It was always that way with her and shoes. One look and she knew things about the person who owned them, sometimes more than she wanted to know.
It was how she'd known that woman was pure evil the moment she had stepped into their lives last year in a pair of hideous black and white pumps. Her father hadn't seen it. He'd married her anyway. And now the life was bleeding out of him, and it was all because of her.
Tears seared down her cheeks and her chest burned with anger as she held her father's cold hands.
She would make her pay, somehow. Ella knew she couldn't go to the police with a secret-spilling red high heel. She needed real proof, and it was going to take a lot more than proving that the shoe fit.
Oooooh . . . chilling!!! I love it. Maybe you should do a whole series of modernized, fairy tale retellings! Did I say I love this?
ReplyDeleteThanks Lisa! I actually would love to do a series of re-tellings! :)
DeleteThis is fantastic! Great job!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kyra!
DeleteSo that's how he died. I always wondered. :)
ReplyDeleteYep. ;)
DeleteRachel- I really, really liked this. It was a very fresh, cool new take on this fairy tale. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jaybird!
DeleteWhat a cool take on his death and it totally makes sense! Awesome work!
ReplyDeleteVery modern twist!
ReplyDeleteThanks. :)
DeleteYikes! You should write the entire book, girl!
ReplyDeleteThanks Cassie! Some day I will. :)
DeleteOoh - nice tension. We need a Team Plot Twist/Tragedy/Horror. :)
ReplyDeleteHa! I agree. :)
DeleteLOVE This! OMG, I totally want to know more. And an MC whose super power is knowing stuff about people just by looking at their shoes, Genius!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Cassie you should write the rest of the book. You could even call it "If the Shoe Fits."
Okay, I'm getting carried away. Loved this.
Thanks so much Rena! I actually do want to write a whole book with this premise. Hopefully it will happen soon. :)
DeleteI love the psychic shoe connection! Clever intrigue and engaging plot. The last line made me laugh. Well done! :)
ReplyDeleteNow there's a woman who nderstands shoes!
ReplyDeleteWho knows the importance of shoes more than Cinderella? ;)
DeleteOh no. I cannot have hideous black and white pumps. *shivers*
ReplyDelete:P This was really fantastic! Great job :)
Thanks Samantha!
DeleteI love the shoe connection! Fantastic angle!
ReplyDeleteA2Z Mommy and What’s In Between
Thanks!
DeleteOh my gosh! This is awesome! The last line is completely brilliant! Great entry! Thanks so much for being part of the fest!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Leigh! This was such a fun fest! :)
DeleteThis is great! Love how you take the shoe thing in a different direction. I hope she avenges her father.
ReplyDeleteThanks Nick! :)
DeleteLiked this!!! I want to keep reading your version of the story!
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