Here's my flash fiction piece for Alexfest. (Although, part of me wishes I had posted it before I read everyone else's super awesome ones! Now I'm feeling insecure.) ;) This has been such a fun blogfest. Thanks again to our hosts and a big thank you to Alex, for being the kind of guy who inspires a whole community to do a blogfest in his honor!“Mommy, tell me again about the Cavanaugh Cosbolts!”
“I’ve told you this
story a million times.”
“But it’s my
favorite! Please!”
“Okay. Once upon a
time there was a fleet of cosbolts filled with space ninjas. They protected our
world, and others, from evil doers.”
“'Cause they’d stun
them with their IWSGs!”
“Yes, they’d use
their Intergalactic Warrior Stun Guns to capture them. Then they’d have to face
the ninja leader. The Great Cavanaugh.”
“Who was totally
awesome and had all the best ninja moves and even played guitar! Right mom?”
“That’s right.”
“Mom, I love this story.”
And finally, a great big thank you to Mrs. Cavanaugh! I can't imagine the amount of time it takes for Alex to do everything he does. Thanks for letting him! ;) He is truly our Ninja Captain and we'd be lost without him.
Yes, some day we will be telling stories like this! Great idea. Your flash rocks, nothing to be insecure about :) Great note to Mrs. C., too.
ReplyDeleteNothing to be insecure about! Nicely done! :)
ReplyDeleteSo sweet yet action packed. Nice flash fiction and bedtime story all in one.
ReplyDeleteLove the way you told it like a story; very creative.
ReplyDeleteI thought your piece was great and very creative :)
ReplyDeleteHaha. Love this. Very well done my dear!
ReplyDeleteI like that story as well!!! It was not lame at all. Thanks so much, Rachel. You're the best!
ReplyDeleteWe would indeed be lost without our Ninja Captain.
ReplyDeleteHa-- this was great! Not lame. I didn't have time for all the creative efforts and had to keep my thanks simple and straight forward. He certainly has contributed much to the community.
ReplyDeleteI loved the mommy telling a story perspective. Loved it. Good job, using all the prompts and telling a wonderful story. :o)
ReplyDeleteIntergalactic Warrior Stun Guns for IWSG . . . I LOVE This!!!!! Well done. So creative!
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