tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post5632000151619634211..comments2024-03-27T00:28:59.452-07:00Comments on Writing on the Wall: HookersRachel Schieffelbeinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01629400142880123520noreply@blogger.comBlogger44125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-38138044772631246862012-07-18T08:08:26.341-07:002012-07-18T08:08:26.341-07:00Hi Rachel! Your opening sentence is great. Loved i...Hi Rachel! Your opening sentence is great. Loved it! Sentence two is also nice. What a contrast!Ink in the Bookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03117718811407968345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-8507904343692038042012-07-17T23:53:53.104-07:002012-07-17T23:53:53.104-07:00These sound great! The first two are my faves as w...These sound great! The first two are my faves as well. :)Trishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-85221621500043513452012-07-17T15:45:54.791-07:002012-07-17T15:45:54.791-07:00I especially like the first two!I especially like the first two!1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-25111768224768571472012-07-17T09:49:54.599-07:002012-07-17T09:49:54.599-07:00Me likes! All of them. No favorites. :)Me likes! All of them. No favorites. :)DL Hammonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02007260062331783715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-26160331076818208472012-07-17T00:39:54.035-07:002012-07-17T00:39:54.035-07:00I LOVE that first line. It captures so much about...I LOVE that first line. It captures so much about the world and the characters already.tlbodinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08334888426768433724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-26312800436418969432012-07-16T22:22:47.061-07:002012-07-16T22:22:47.061-07:00These are great! I like the fire and ice line too....These are great! I like the fire and ice line too. Neither are good, I guess.Nick Wilfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03841776353790635132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-78139040129836134692012-07-16T20:43:05.891-07:002012-07-16T20:43:05.891-07:00Oh, what are you talking about? You've got som...Oh, what are you talking about? You've got some great opening lines here! I especially like the first one...Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03994768531978964801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-12840218159994513572012-07-16T18:54:55.662-07:002012-07-16T18:54:55.662-07:00Just to say thank you for your comment on mine, ha...Just to say thank you for your comment on mine, have had an error and not been able to publish it :( but I appreciate it!VikLithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12675200811539358961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-65947051001190383332012-07-16T18:38:48.964-07:002012-07-16T18:38:48.964-07:00We writers are so hard on ourselves. You've go...We writers are so hard on ourselves. You've got some awesome hookers here!Emily Gentherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04720127792394245223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-27933482241112561812012-07-16T18:26:11.674-07:002012-07-16T18:26:11.674-07:00The second one definitely peaks my interest! :)The second one definitely peaks my interest! :)Krista McLaughlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09230770035490273428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-71109895733213951152012-07-16T17:06:51.633-07:002012-07-16T17:06:51.633-07:00You said you're going through to strengthen? I...You said you're going through to strengthen? I loved all of these, especially the little to eat, the fire and ice. They're all really well done!Lynn(e) Schmidthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13111991752818662608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-90426982899460997802012-07-16T16:43:37.273-07:002012-07-16T16:43:37.273-07:00Thanks everyone! You guys are too sweet. :)Thanks everyone! You guys are too sweet. :)Rachel Schieffelbeinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01629400142880123520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-71427949726065899552012-07-16T16:37:00.805-07:002012-07-16T16:37:00.805-07:00Well, food does play a major role in Hansel & ...Well, food does play a major role in Hansel & Gretel. ;)Rachel Schieffelbeinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01629400142880123520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-83809108034125434082012-07-16T16:29:47.416-07:002012-07-16T16:29:47.416-07:00chilling and thrilling! all great opening lines!chilling and thrilling! all great opening lines!Tara Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-82241284125918021142012-07-16T16:20:17.200-07:002012-07-16T16:20:17.200-07:00I agree with a lot of the above comments - the fir...I agree with a lot of the above comments - the first line is great!! I can't quite figure out which woman would be worse, ice or fire, so kudos to you for making opposites equally terrifying.Jeannettehttp://www.folioroad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-20410766269961374632012-07-16T15:58:18.768-07:002012-07-16T15:58:18.768-07:00I love your first line. It's a great way to st...I love your first line. It's a great way to start.L.M. Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05834881688010514126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-79448783261765019422012-07-16T15:00:19.160-07:002012-07-16T15:00:19.160-07:00These are all fab, the first is probably my fave!These are all fab, the first is probably my fave!VikLithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12675200811539358961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-13883718022568851862012-07-16T14:38:18.909-07:002012-07-16T14:38:18.909-07:00I don't know, I think most of these are pretty...I don't know, I think most of these are pretty darn good! LOVE the fire and ice. And I'll have a piece of that chocolate cake please :)Kelley Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06373650788799372118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-48632506988839543432012-07-16T14:20:40.053-07:002012-07-16T14:20:40.053-07:00Love the ice and fire. Great images!Love the ice and fire. Great images!Tasha Seegmillerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11489911822054861132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-11976254247192331452012-07-16T12:55:41.849-07:002012-07-16T12:55:41.849-07:00I like the one about ice and fire. Well worded!
A...I like the one about ice and fire. Well worded!<br /><br />Allison (<a href="http://www.alsgeekbanter.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Geek Banter</a>)Allisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02586970076965983267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-39743403904992908542012-07-16T11:17:31.009-07:002012-07-16T11:17:31.009-07:00they were all good, but I really liked the second ...they were all good, but I really liked the second one and the last one. good job!prerna picketthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06207620652405474672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-86064025066382647422012-07-16T10:10:24.794-07:002012-07-16T10:10:24.794-07:00I agree with everyone else, the fire and ice one i...I agree with everyone else, the fire and ice one is great. But I think all of them are good. Great job!Jenny S. Morrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00482342313938669366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-57070398623705228982012-07-16T10:04:00.502-07:002012-07-16T10:04:00.502-07:00I like the one about the chocolate cake! And I lov...I like the one about the chocolate cake! And I love the idea of a retelling of Hansel & Gretel from Gretel's perspective.Johanna Garthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15515478890074610814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-40452096749817583702012-07-16T09:33:34.978-07:002012-07-16T09:33:34.978-07:00I disagree that they are weak. I love #1. It is su...I disagree that they are weak. I love #1. It is subtle, but says volumes.Elizabeth Seckmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00045076826326574984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-878172058685455293.post-90183440551253012382012-07-16T09:17:24.604-07:002012-07-16T09:17:24.604-07:00"If my step-mother was ice, the old woman was..."If my step-mother was ice, the old woman was fire." <--I really like this one. And now I really want chocolate cake too.<br /><br />Looking forward to the hangers!Tobi Summershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04568662522495853235noreply@blogger.com